PLEASE EDIT. IS THiS A GOOD PARAGRAPH FOR ANIMAL FARM?

thank you for defining the ignments requirements, "satire" & "allegory". I did not know what these 2 words meant. I have read the book. I've even explained it to others when a similiar situation proves power over others always swells heads. It is most difficult NOT to abuse power, wether it is power over your family, school, church, work, county, or Country. As your definitions are informative, your entire paragraphs are short concise, and cover all that needs to be said. You'd get an A by me, but alas I am not the power that be's, in this situation.